My first poem!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys sorry for the long absence,but I cudn't think of any thing I wanted to write about.
i wrote this poem on a night wen i coldn't sleep,and i was pretty surprised wen it turned out to be this poem!!! I was the kind of guy who always left out the essay type questions b'cos i didn't know how to elaborate on the answers!!!!!!!!Still this is not the only poem i have written,there is another one,bt i am posting this one up on the net first to be sure of the kind of response i get.
if u guys want some more poems, i can get some very good ones written by my friends,with their permission.

Do comment and tell me how u find it,ok?? Please!!!!!!!!!!


I love no one,'cos I am not capable of loving anymore.
I feel nothing,
No happiness,
No sadness,
No Love,
No hatred,
Nothing
I am Nothing,
I am hollow,
I don't want to live,
Neither do I want to die

They say time heals all wounds.
Does it?
Does it?
I am still as numb as i was when death came
And touched her on the shoulder,
My love, you told me to live on,
So I am living,
But I am not alive,
I am just a walking corpse.

The Memories of our time together are golden,
They remain etched forever in my brain,
As the only time I was alive.

I am Hollow,
I am Hollow,
I am dead inside,
Just a living corpse,
Just a living corpse.



PS:also suggest a title for it!!